Wednesday, October 29, 2008

30PD = 10-29-08 (#10)

Friends, why must I look into your eyes
To find something I should already know?

You want me to be there for you
But when I need, you suddenly disavow

Me and leave me standing,
wating for you to ultimately no-show.

You blow if off and say, "It's okay,
Brittany. You didn't want us anyhow."

- So I've been stuck for a while because the prompt was "Write a formal, structured poem." And we all know I have a really hard time with that. So I cheated a little. I wrote this as a quick write for Creative Writing, it's a ghazal. So here you go. I don't really like it, but eh. -

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